Messed up

I got several adverse responses when I asked people to take a look at chapter 3 of MWP:FH, I got called a sick freak and more, lol. But what they don't know is that the chapter went under three rewrites and two revisions along with the five months it took to get it down in words. In the last bit I had to listen to one song just to get the mood right: UN Owen Was Her. I do promise that C3 is as bad as I ever will get.